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The World Champion Fighter by ~Broadcraig:iconBroadcraig:



He who fights with knowledge
Fights smarter
Tonguing through books
Reading up on martyr's.

He who fights with love
Fights lighter
Piercing the film of the sun
Making life brighter.


He who fights with heart
Fights for longer
Like a duracell bunny on steroids
Like a boxer but stronger.

He who fights with loss
Fights with life
Loses it all
But comes back for another try.

He who fights with this all
Fights for us all
And win's us over with the words of God.
©2008-2009 ~Broadcraig
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Author's Comments

I've been thinking of the challenges that general life throws at us lately. Thinking about the goals and thinking about how people deal with these problems. I myself, would probably throw myself in emotionally with heart and that's fine, it gets the job done, there are people that will think about the problem educationally for years until they can solve it like an equation and that's fine too.

I think the point is, we all have these attributes and they are all amazing attributes and they all have their pro's and con's but they will never 100% solve the problem for us. The person or being that is able to combine all of these attributes will rule the world over any celebrity, politician, 'God'.

Once again, i've gone for flow,structure and rhyme more than anything in this piece. It's simple again and abit away from my normal style, I apologise if anyone doesn't like this but it's important for me to move between styles and ways of being accessible/experimental.

I do hope you can enjoy though.

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:icondragondreamzero:
wow. pretty good. i like it. nice work.

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Always Rhyme like a Dreamer..
Staying True like a Believer..
L.R.P. remains in me 4ever..
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omg.. I swear, I didn't read this before I wrote my piece...
but anyways, I love the last stanza and the energizer bunny on steriods.... that is hysterical!!!

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I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
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That's really good, but you're writting is always good lol. I have to agree with SouLXposed, "Like a duracell bunny on steroids" is like the best line in the poem.

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Never say goodbye because goodbye
Means going away and going away
Means forgetting.
++ Peter Pan
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"Whats the point of fighting, if theres a point of loving.
Spiteful and delighting, too many of us plighting.
A gift from the heavens above
fate has taken it they call it love."
- Denise Nardella

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
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Everyone is always fighting, it's not always in the sense that there's a war or a battle of guns and fists.

Sometimes we have to fight for love...

Cool quote though

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You win, I'm sadder than you...

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Ahhh thanks alot..it reminds me of duracell adverts!

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You win, I'm sadder than you...

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I did it abit after i posted the journal anyway. When i get back from my girlfriends, i'm going to put links to everyone's pieces on my journal and on the explanation for this piece.

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You win, I'm sadder than you...

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:iconsoulxposed:
aha, very cool

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I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconnat89:
I like the structure...I like the way you can keep the structure the same, only changing subtle things with the words & it allows the piece to grow upwards & outwards, it's not limited.

"He who fights with love
Fights lighter
Piercing the film of the sun
Making life brighter."

I like that image a lot. I'm not sure which you intended it to mean or both, but I like imagining the "lighter" way of fighting is more weightless, as well as with clearer sight...

It's another good poem sweetie. :batman:

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