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The apple of my eye,
The oxygen in my blood; hesitant
The sand in my desert
The sea on my feet.

The ink in my scripture
The words on the invitation
The sounds in a celebration
The vicar on the altar.

The dove white in your dress
The war drum beat of your heart
The love in my eyes;
I'll be happy tonight.
©2008-2009 ~Broadcraig
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Suppose I better actually write down some form of meaning. A love poem, which is quite obvious...I initially wanted to put down opposites to explain love but then it didn't really work, so I thought about what kind of things remind me of her, they all tend to be normal things that most people wouldn't even notice because they are so normal, it then moved on to objects and colours[I refuse to spell this work the american way, sorry if this offends anyone] linked with marriage[and ultimately hope and peace].

The repetition at the beginning of each line comes from a poem I read by U A Fanthorpe, which was also I love poem, she's an amazing writer, so if you get the chance, try and find her work.
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uh-oh! did you fall too?? :cries:

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
Ahahah maybe :P

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You win, I'm sadder than you...

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This is beautiful. It takes simplicity and cliches and blends them together into a wonderfully lovely paste. Fantastic!

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I know I should be happy but I'm just scared instead
With the memories of last time racing around inside my head
I hope it's worth my effort to do this one more time
Just keep your promises and maybe I'll be fine
nicely done. it's good.

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Always Rhyme like a Dreamer..
Staying True like a Believer..
L.R.P. remains in me 4ever..
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this sis a very lovely poem....i can feel the emotion i swear! its so much better than watching a movie with a lot of emotion.....this gives the perfect explanation of love in the little often unnoticed things:thumbsup: :wow:

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Perfection is intensely annoying.~Hugh Laurie

Being voted the world's sexiest vegetarian is about as cool as it gets. It's not quite as cool as Brad Pitt, but it'll do.~Chris Martin
Well then be prepared for the pain... since PAIN IS LOVE!! :cries:

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
depends really!

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yea ok...:surrender: Keep hope alive let me know how it works 4u. :fingerscrossed:

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
You're quite negative lately :P

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