Apocalyptic sky/laser beams fire overhead/the grinding of metal/cover your ears from the machines callous roar lad/lampposts make for enemy eyes/key cards enclose the inhabitants/night by night/the war goes on//
Illuminations cut the night sky to death/magnetic clouds appear overheard threatening to do their worst/the scream of man becomes as common as a bomb falling/the survival rate freezes and then smashes under the pressure/the war goes on//
Football pitches convert to battle trenches/kitchen appliances become makeshift weapons in the battle to breathe/the bleeping pulse of the rusting enemy/walking torturous hard drives ready to strike/night by night/the war goes on//
When there is no room in heaven, the dead shall appear as a storm on the horizon and there is a storm that surrounds us//
Goodbye civilisation//
The war goes on//














Comments
That's what this piece made me think. It's a very good piece, nice imagery
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If it's good enough to take to your psychiatrist, it's good enough to make a song of.~Paul McCartney
Being voted the world's sexiest vegetarian is about as cool as it gets. It's not quite as cool as Brad Pitt, but it'll do.~Chris Martin
I envy your work. :] Great work. Excellent imagery and word flow. I love the structure.
In short: I really liked it.
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"A prayer for the wild at heart kept in cages."
~Tennessee Williams
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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
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If it's good enough to take to your psychiatrist, it's good enough to make a song of.~Paul McCartney
Being voted the world's sexiest vegetarian is about as cool as it gets. It's not quite as cool as Brad Pitt, but it'll do.~Chris Martin
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If you're feeling indistinguishable,
Like a tiny white flower next to a million others,
Pick up a paintbrush,
And make yourself yellow
<3
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