The Last Journey Of An Anorexic
Truffles float like jellyfish helmets
Forming a skin over the waves of a chocolate dessert,
Picturesque loneliness; Fighting for a part.
Wicker baskets caked in apple pie covered in flies
Their last meal before a trip to Paris
(We died before we had a chance to finish)












Comments
I've missed your writing so much.
My boyfriends mom was anorexic.
Its kinda sucky =X
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"Hello how are you love your shoes and your hair"
Yet poetic.
A strong flow in this one. It subtly suggests the theme, until the eventual realization of the reader. Not necessarily of the theme, but the story behind the poem and the bitter feeling of suffering.
It leaves a sour taste in your mouth, but certainly gets your brain thinking of the possibilities and stories to be told. Well done, excellent work. Though I'd expect no less from you, that's for sure.
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Bring on the Trumpets!
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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
happy new year
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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
Please don't be offended by my lack of activity; I think your works are excellent and breath taking none the less.
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Bring on the Trumpets!
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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
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"Hello how are you love your shoes and your hair"
But in all seriousness, I always feel bad when I know I've been neglecting comments (in fact, I should be doing homework now...) or just not commenting as much as I'd like. Though I try to make up with it by making my comments more meaningful and in depth; compared to the many two-dimensional comments I see around dA (no offense to anyone!). Hopefully it does make up for it in the end.
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Bring on the Trumpets!
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If it's good enough to take to your psychiatrist, it's good enough to make a song of.~Paul McCartney
Being voted the world's sexiest vegetarian is about as cool as it gets. It's not quite as cool as Brad Pitt, but it'll do.~Chris Martin
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