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Dark crystal dreams fall on a castle moat
Landslides of rocks and men to keep the king afloat
Silhouettes and shadows in a marked out building
Poisoned Ivy swallows the white of the ceiling,
Branches lie naked on the cusp of great change
Through stick fights and gun brights it all stays the same
When the king is dead and the flag has been raised
How things change when the clouds turn to grey,
How things change as the hour hand creeps away...
©2008-2009 ~Broadcraig
:iconbroadcraig:

Author's Comments

Given the present political change within America, I thought i'd write something that reflects that, not in a positive or negative light but more so in a "it's up to you how you view and use this" sort of way.

I hope you enjoy this piece abit more than the last one, alot of people didn't appreciate the constricted structure and rhyming...but i've still kept at it just to annoy you.

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:iconzendra13:
i'm in love with the first line.

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~H-E-L-L-O COMING STRAIGHT FROM TOKYO K-I-T-T-Y LET ME SLIP BETWEEN YOUR THEIGHS!~

:blackrose:when the black rose dies so do our souls:blackrose:

:rose:love is a precious thing so don't end up abuseing it:rose:
:iconbroadcraig:
Thanks alot :D

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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
:iconzendra13:
no problem!

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~H-E-L-L-O COMING STRAIGHT FROM TOKYO K-I-T-T-Y LET ME SLIP BETWEEN YOUR THEIGHS!~

:blackrose:when the black rose dies so do our souls:blackrose:

:rose:love is a precious thing so don't end up abuseing it:rose:
:iconhoppipoppi:
beautiful beautiful imagery, :aww:
and i quite like the rhyming bits :paranoid:


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:iconblazing-blade:
nicely done, broad perspective:)

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If it's good enough to take to your psychiatrist, it's good enough to make a song of.~Paul McCartney

Being voted the world's sexiest vegetarian is about as cool as it gets. It's not quite as cool as Brad Pitt, but it'll do.~Chris Martin
:iconbroadcraig:
You're the only one!

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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
:iconemmyfailz:
I love all your different structures and styles,
you are great at anything you do. =]
Good job, I like it. =]
:iconbroadcraig:
Thanks alot, that means loads

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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby

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