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Passing presents on the paper run,
Ignoring people and their problems; Avoiding the sun.
Riding towards the horizon with the sun on my skin,
Just me and my bicycle; The world against me and him
Just keep on moving; Keep on moving where the wind takes us.

Following the electric blue railway lines,
Taking hit after hit; We're doing just fine.
Riding to the direction of the moon with my heart on my hand,
Just me and my bicycle; Making a stand
Just keep on moving; Keep on moving where the wind wills us,
Straight to you...
©2008-2009 ~Broadcraig
:iconbroadcraig:

Author's Comments

More a song.

Love isn't always about love for a person. Sometimes love is about the journey, (the journey of the lonely paper boy we never paid attention to), the discovery of others and ourselves....enjoy it.

Rhyming couplets....obvious structure, i'm sorry, i'll get out of this habit soon!

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:icondarkcreations:
wow, thats very creative. its really sweet too. i understand that very well. Just because you love something that isnt a person doesnt have to qualify for obsession. just love.
^^ nice job! great poem.

--
My mind works like lightning, one brilliant flash and it's gone.

MWCL
:iconbroadcraig:
Glad you like and relate to the piece

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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
:icongalengargirl90:
i likeit it reminds me of the song no handlebars
:icongalengargirl90:
even to your poem is the love of the lonly journey for a paper boy, not a deteriating country on hate and controling goverment. i think its the bke part lol
:icontechnocore-rawrbot-x:
I love this.

The structure is nice. =D

--
Emmyface.

My brain is the key that sets me free.
-Harry Houdini.

I'm a crazy teenage poet,
I bet you didn't even know it.
I'm pretty Daft,
Oh yes, it is my craft.
I'm terribly in love,
Oh yes, it is all true, the above.
:iconnat89:
You always manage to open people's eyes to something new. Journeys can be wonderful. This poem leaves me desiring some form of motion like described.

--
Sleep Architect. [link] / [link]
:iconbroadcraig:
Wahey, thanks alot!

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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
:iconbroadcraig:
What song is that ? :)

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I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby
:iconbroadcraig:
Journeys are wonderful, train journeys.....to you

--
I would like to see people refusing to work in any job they felt was wrong. I would like to see work dodgers: honorable and brave people who refuse to continue to feed this monstrous culture
-Chris Busby

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